Comments on: This I Believe–Pamela

by: sheqira smith

Wed, 21 May 2008 15:44:22 +0000

IVE BEEN IN THAT SITUATION TO WHERE IVE QUESTIONED MYSELF DO I REALLY MEAN WHAT I SAY I HATE MY FAMILY. THIS WAS A GREAT THIS BELIEVE.

by: meghan

Wed, 21 May 2008 15:22:39 +0000

this is good i can relate to this good job! :]

by: Kassie

Thu, 01 May 2008 18:24:42 +0000

This year I am a senior at Charlotte High School, and it took me this long to understand the things that you do now. I admire your outlook about your family, and wish that I could have acquired it sooner. It defiantly would have made life up until now easier. I also use a quote from you, “having a perfect life isn’t the real meaning of happiness because nothing is really perfect and happiness really is appreciating what you have”. You did a great job on your speech - the only thing I could suggest is maybe slow down a little bit because at the beginning you went pretty fast, and I had to pause it and read it. But other than that, great job!

by: vivia

Wed, 05 Mar 2008 17:27:40 +0000

true that aha =]

by: brenda

Wed, 05 Mar 2008 17:20:18 +0000

i like it a lot u had a lot of good reasons.and it made it better n_n nice i like it good job !!

by: coyne

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 19:19:07 +0000

i know how you feel. i always want to be a way from my family. i was a way from my family for almost a month. i always wonder if i had a family. i like to help out people that are orphan my best friend in the whole world was orphan. i help him out as much as i can. that is all we can do. and every one should be thankful for every thing they have in there lives.

by: coyne

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 19:11:33 +0000

hello pamela,

by: Rosilyn

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 17:52:05 +0000

I thought your essay wsa really deep and it was on point, you rocked it keep up the good work kiddo!! ♥♥♥

by: Bonnie

Tue, 04 Mar 2008 17:43:36 +0000

Very well written, and you mkae great points. The way you talked about your brother reminds me of my sister.